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7/21/2010

facade of death

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Longing to let you stay
begging to stop you from assenting,
bolt blench to fall
running over in this west wide side.


rashes starts to grow
itchy and painful
my face fades like a morning mists
it was then my dreadful ending.

i wanted to blame you
 for blanching linen in the sun
i am afraid to go
annihilation is pursuing me.

i am afraid riffraff
fetch me up in this window of torment
drench me with your  love
let me feel that i am alive.

pour me a heavy dose of  antedote
i don't want to leave in distress

my breath clunk swiftly
saving myself in cruelty
running in this two edged sword
terrified it might be too late i will  be struck...

11 comments:

  1. Nagiging makata ka na ata ngayon ah... halos lahat ng entries mo lately eh nasa ganung style...lolz... hehehhehehe

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  3. Most profound piece, I enjoyed the read, which was very pleasurable.

    Thanks for visiting and becoming a follower
    very much appreciated.
    Yvonne.

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  4. love how you convey your feelings here...

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  5. lalim....
    hehe.
    but i loved it:)

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  6. I am Xprosaic: hehehehe, naiispired lang ako kay arvin eh.. kaya siguro nakakgawa ako..

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  7. welcome to my world of poetry : i would like to say thank you to you for appreciating my blog..

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  8. Jag: wow naman, nahihiya nga ako eh.. dami kaya makata dito... aspirant lang ako..

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  9. ambiguous_angel: hehehehe, sugatan lang siguro angel...

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  10. nagiging makata ka na..good luck sa mga poems mo pang isusulat..

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