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6/11/2010

Knowing.....

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Your love fades like a morning mists
your smile blanch like a colorful rainbow,
A little facet of dream has  already gone;
Your vow was broken, a dull piece...


The world is quaking in pain
Every heart peered with blood in the eyes,
I can see the gripe, and I can feel the destitution;
I see no kingdom, nor your promised paradise...

I am shaking in this lonely room
In pain, injured and disabled,
Every eyes  chew over;
I am afraid, look at these tears...

Life vanished like an ocean wood
A crack starts to grow, and it is dreadful,
My heart numb, and  i can feel nothing;
Where are you, I am waiting...

Begging to dry my tears
Craving for your hug,
In this emptiness, fill me with your  love;
I will be waiting till this vision gone...

8 comments:

  1. nice poem..darating din siya..hintay ka lang muna..

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  2. wow, own composition mo ba ito parekoy?

    ang ganda ng poem ^_^

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  3. aww..napakaheartbroken naman ng poem na to..nakakalungkot..pero maganda ^^

    (p.s. check out my latest post if you have time,,.thanks :3)

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  4. Arvin: hehehehe, maraming salamat..

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  5. feil-kun: salamat sa pag puri, hehehehe... sarili kung composition yan..

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  6. ayu: salamat ha...

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  7. @kuya tim: i just edit from paint..it's a downloaded font and a picture ^^

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  8. better hold your head up and go dry your own tears. don't wait for anyone to do it for you...what if the person doesn't return? you will just put your life on hold.don't do that.

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